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New poem

New poem

Hi @TAB @Bunniekins @Former-Member @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Shaz51 @Clawde and all forumites


This one has been a long time coming! I hope it connects with some of you

Stillness

There is a stillness here
Contemplating the heartbeat
Of god

A subatomic metronome
Marking time eternally
A footprint in our consciousness
Evidence of the possible

Safe in nature's cathedral
Whispers subdue the shouts
Emanating from the chaos
Of our unforgiving paradise

The watermark on each soul
Security against deception
Miracle or accident?
Intention over chance?

Off the beaten track I go
My mind guided by confusion
Coherence a mere memory
Faded and with edges curled


There is a frenzy here
Blissfully ignoring
The end

StuF

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@StuF I have read a lot of poetry and like it. Its good. I am pretty sure Jacques and Hams and others would also resonate ... but leave it to you if you want to tag them.

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Thanks @Appleblossom

I'll try tagging them in future 🙂

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Love it @StuF It takes courage for a fella to put his heart on the wet butchers block..

and thankyou so much for tagging me here.

The elusive nature of true love is what makes it such a coveted prize

I nearly missed your poem. I need to pay attention at the wheel.

tonys mb1

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Hey there @Sophia1 @StuF How come it took me this long to find this little island .

May I ask 2 questions please . Who started this thread.

I have an old scatter gun with some words jammed down both barrels. Can I pull the trigger here one

rainy day.

Seams like a place where words can be, let of the leash... thankyou tonys mb 1

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Hey @tonys

I guess I started this thread, but it would be wonderful for others to contribute if you wish! It is indeed an off leash park 🙂

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Thankyou @StuF for letting me stroll in your park..

My book keeper knits, but her face is far away. . . .

K N I T T I N G

Brumbies ran wild in her hills far behind

Trains crossing plains places they'll never find.

Click clack of needles old chair where she sits

Voices in dreams hold her hands as she knits.

The styles that's trapped in the worn vinyl tracks,

Friends never called when she fell through the cracks,

of the floorboards to cellars so dark that you're blind

As you weave your last threads in the webs of your mind.

Paperbacks laughing by rippling brooks

courted librarians for more than their looks

For snapping sound dull thud of dusty dead books

for not we knew queens could fall victim to rooks

Come the last days of the hour glass sands

Bleeds on her knees face melts in her hands.

The quilts that we weaved for our love ones to see

whispering were we all we could be

The waiting of woman and rhythms of knitting

was love we bestowed on them true love befitting

The years that they silently distantly gaze

For silhouette riders in a red sunset haze

From places where lovers entwined in the threads

Now doodle on note pads in cold empty beds

There are no more brumbies just fire swept hills

Nor train tracks through the ashes of the eyes window sills

Neath cinnamon ceilings in white coats they fuss

Slashing the seats on the bar windowed bus.

Will dreams spun of silk cradle fruits on her truss

will love we once gave find its home back in us.

tonys moonbase 1

there just love.. this life , and us.. May all else waste in the shadows..

@Sophia1 @Oaktree @Bunniekins @LeChuck @Appleblossom @Thyme @Owlunar n all

Also Juddi Very best wishes to all..

The styles that trapped

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@Judi9877 the above poem was intended for you too I think.

@tonys

That was beautiful my friend! As someone who knits I appreciated it. Will read it again!

You have a gift for words.

Meggle

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Love it @tonys !!!

Thanks for sharing 🙂

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@tonys what a beautiful yet melancholy poemxx

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@StuF I hope you can write and share more!

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