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New poem

New poem

Hi @TAB @Bunniekins @Former-Member @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Shaz51 @Clawde and all forumites


This one has been a long time coming! I hope it connects with some of you

Stillness

There is a stillness here
Contemplating the heartbeat
Of god

A subatomic metronome
Marking time eternally
A footprint in our consciousness
Evidence of the possible

Safe in nature's cathedral
Whispers subdue the shouts
Emanating from the chaos
Of our unforgiving paradise

The watermark on each soul
Security against deception
Miracle or accident?
Intention over chance?

Off the beaten track I go
My mind guided by confusion
Coherence a mere memory
Faded and with edges curled


There is a frenzy here
Blissfully ignoring
The end

StuF

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Will try @Kyle1 !

🙂

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@ thankyou @Bunniekins . Rain n time.. bedfellows for reflection.. Have a easy day my friend.

t mb 1

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Thankyou you thoughtful soul. @Oaktree Yes well judi was the person that put the seed in my head

and I keyed her name in every which way but it would bring up the ladies handle and I do hope she see's it, and then some of me worries too. Hope you are in cruise control mate.

I'll do a fun poem for our thread later. Tonys mb 1

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Just a little something I jotted down on Thursday night when I couldn't sleep. Raw- no edits since then

@Bunniekins @Appleblossom @TAB @Meowmy @Bill16 @Former-Member @Shaz51 and plenty of others- far from an exhaustive list

I hope someone gets something from it

Survive

Resolutely ruminating

I can’t escape my tired self

Trapped inside this timeless torment

Wild nightmares echo in my mind

Please afford me some compassion

I haven’t yet abandoned hope

Peace may yet be attained

If I can just survive tonight

StuF

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@StuF hey StuF, beautiful poem. Very reflective. I can very much relate to it. Many times,often. I feel so dark and anxious ha. It's good to have forum friends for support.

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Thanks @Meowmy - glad (but not) you can relate. Wish none of us felt like this.

Forum friends are great 🙂

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Hugs @StuF

Hello @Meowmy , @tonys , @Kyle1 , @Bunniekins 🥰

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hi @Shaz51 how are you?

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Hello @Kyle1 how are you my friend ❤️

I am feeling OK but very tired

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Hugs back at ya @Shaz51

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