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New poem

New poem

Hi @TAB @Bunniekins @Former-Member @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Shaz51 @Clawde and all forumites


This one has been a long time coming! I hope it connects with some of you

Stillness

There is a stillness here
Contemplating the heartbeat
Of god

A subatomic metronome
Marking time eternally
A footprint in our consciousness
Evidence of the possible

Safe in nature's cathedral
Whispers subdue the shouts
Emanating from the chaos
Of our unforgiving paradise

The watermark on each soul
Security against deception
Miracle or accident?
Intention over chance?

Off the beaten track I go
My mind guided by confusion
Coherence a mere memory
Faded and with edges curled


There is a frenzy here
Blissfully ignoring
The end

StuF

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Hey @Sophia1

Thanks as ever for the feedback

I'll see what else I can dredge up 🙂

PS Don't be sad

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appreciated @StuF

don't take on my mood though will you..

look forward to reading more

take care

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You take care too @Sophia1

I'll get back to you 🙂

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OK @Sophia1

Choosing poems is fun, but also stressful! lol

Last one for a while...

Madly In Love

I’ve got my world on inside out

I want to sing but only sigh

Certainties succumb to doubts

And all my truths decay to lies

Milking spiders for the answers

To questions I have yet to ask

Rarely so brave to take the chances

That involve shedding this mask

With a perpetual sense of dread

Whilst flailing in a blinding fog…

Still, if I survive this night

Perhaps tomorrow I’ll find you

I imagine you bathed in light

A vision splendid for tired eyes

You resurrect my will to fight

But now I know why Cupid cries

The tears rolling down his cheeks

Do not well only from sadness

Rather the life in love he seeks

Brings with it the ultimate madness

I may as well tag some others while I'm at it! @TAB @Appleblossom @Bunniekins @tonys

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Dont stress @StuF

Prose not my thing, so wont comment .

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@StuF i wish i could fall in love

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All good @TAB 🙂

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I kind of wish I could too @Bunniekins

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@StuF

Magnifico!

Grazias.

I do not feel they need explaining. The speak to me a lot.

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Thanks @Appleblossom

Always nice to hear of some resonance 🙂

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