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Newest poem

Newest poem

(I'm not sure what area of the forum this is being posted in, sorry...hopefully "Social" space?)

@TAB @Meowmy @Bunniekins @Bill16 @Glisten @Oaktree @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Sophia1 @Shaz51 @Jacques @Gibbs @MissGremlin and all. So hard to make a complete list.

Below is my latest poem. I don't know how I feel about it any more. But time to release it into the wild and move on.

Hope it connects for you; in part at least...

Beyond The Pale

With only one at our disposal
With only one to keep us safe
Surely sense must guide us down
The path toward harmony

As one with our environment
As one with our humanity
What use is profit if we destroy
That which sustains our existence?

Conditioned air inflates our lungs
Temperature is on our whim
Outside, nature is less inclined
To yield to such delusions

Insufficient satisfaction
Stimulates disparity
Forever chasing the impossible
Will we never awaken?

To tolerate our slumber
Is to justify the loss
Of the sheer abundance
Entrusted to our care

Is an epic transformation
Possible at this late stage?
Or are we rather self-condemned
To pale into insignificance?

StuF

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Nah @Bunniekins - no uni for this kid. Tried a couple of things. Last 'serious' attempt was TV, Video & Film Production at a private college - I got a half scholarship.

Unfortunately it ended the same way as all my studies - abject failure! lol

You studied much?

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@StuF im a late bloomer i did my course when i was in my forties. i have a BA in philosophy and politics :D. i love uni it was wonderful to sit in lectures and listen to the lecturer rabbit on about stuff. i was undiagnosed manic at the time so it was a bit crazy!

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Sounds interesting @Bunniekins

In terms of education, I wish I'd done a trade actually

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@StuF what trade do you think? i would probably like blacksmithing.

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Yeah, not sure @Bunniekins

Glass blowing has always looked good...but not sure there's much demand in employment terms. Maybe carpentry

But blacksmithing would be interesting too! Not considered that

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I studied languages and history at @Bunniekins as well as doing music and theatre.

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@Abnerisnt uni wonderful! what languages did you study? what history did you study? i just wish i had the brain capacity now to do another course but i think those days are over .... still i would like to sneak into a lecture and just take in all the knowledge 😄

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@StuF glass blowing! i havent seen examples of it for years. why dont you do it? it sounds very creative.

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@Bunniekins

Me and study just don't mix well

How are you this morning anyway?

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@StuF im pretty good thanks 😄 . i hope you are too!

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