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New poem

New poem

Hi @TAB @Bunniekins @Former-Member @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Shaz51 @Clawde and all forumites


This one has been a long time coming! I hope it connects with some of you

Stillness

There is a stillness here
Contemplating the heartbeat
Of god

A subatomic metronome
Marking time eternally
A footprint in our consciousness
Evidence of the possible

Safe in nature's cathedral
Whispers subdue the shouts
Emanating from the chaos
Of our unforgiving paradise

The watermark on each soul
Security against deception
Miracle or accident?
Intention over chance?

Off the beaten track I go
My mind guided by confusion
Coherence a mere memory
Faded and with edges curled


There is a frenzy here
Blissfully ignoring
The end

StuF

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@Sophia1

Thanks for that. I will keep going, and might share some of my older stuff 🙂

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poetry was never my thing @Sophia1 writing perhaps. My brain goes 'ugh' at poetry same as abstract art etc

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Hello @StuF

Yes share away ...

I would love to read more of your work...

Poetry is not as easy as some might think....

Hello @TAB

I have attempted to write poetry over the years and for some reason I seem to be stuck on everything rhyming concept.

Then there is prose which is different again.

I have done some writing also Tab and looking up the definition of prose.

Some of my writing might fall under prose.

Only the experts would know.

I studied 5 years of french and latin and then 1 semester of night school of italian...

too far to drive too tired after full day's work so stopped.

I love languages including english.

These days I get them all muddled up laugh.

Can make interesting conversation ..

Can also receive odd looks from people who actually speak french and or italian fluently..

I love authentic italian food..

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Hi @Sophia1 my first German teacher used to say I had an accent and she couldn't quite place it.
I was so flattered. Took me decades to realise what I was coming up with was a mish mash lol. Heard 5 german speakers as a child none of them sounded close to the others

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well at least you caught the attention of the german teacher @TAB

I imagine that they have dialects even in Germany...

I can't be bothered with capital letters today..

Then of course some people are naturally lazy in there speech..

then there is slang..

So you probably did know more than the teacher....

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When I used to listen I didn't know a word, just sounds. And they All sounded different to one another . One was from Sudentenland, one from Berlin, one Schlesien eg. @Sophia1

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Yes there are dialects @Sophia1 some areas even so different are classified as having their own languages. I stayed in Trier w cousins boyfriend who was a local. She had found him an Asterix book in the local 'language'

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oh wow @TAB

I am surprised that Asterix was allowed there.

So Trier is close to the border.

Where did you live then if you are able to say?

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do you mean where did I stay when I was there ? I was actually there for that long @Sophia1 I stayed in a house share place in Berlin , it was in Kreuzburg, ok names changed now, its the eastern one, near the river, ok right next to Oberbaumbrucke

when I was there , was former East on the other side. Can see from yellow carriages its U bahn not S bahn ok strassebahn or schellbahn in East. was a big train station on east bank of river where all old lines intersected, had to get off one to get on the other

um then I stayed in Hannover , Trier after dropping in to Dusseldorf on the way there and back, then Jerxheim near Wolfenbuttel before getting a lift back to Berlin.I loved the trains there.

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@StuF

I really loved that poem. Thanks

I understand that depth does not always mean you are struggling but finding stillness in the depths is good healing.

I had some moments while away. There were 2 cathedrals of different stripes opposite each other. I sang in both and then played bass in the park next to them.

Blues and Beatles.

Then looked down and saw other insects lol.

Cheers mate

@TAB @Sophia1 @Bunniekins @Meowmy

had a good mini Dutch moment saying bye to a german yesterday. She said 'Dag' and so did I... finding common ground.

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