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New poem

New poem

Hi @TAB @Bunniekins @Former-Member @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Shaz51 @Clawde and all forumites


This one has been a long time coming! I hope it connects with some of you

Stillness

There is a stillness here
Contemplating the heartbeat
Of god

A subatomic metronome
Marking time eternally
A footprint in our consciousness
Evidence of the possible

Safe in nature's cathedral
Whispers subdue the shouts
Emanating from the chaos
Of our unforgiving paradise

The watermark on each soul
Security against deception
Miracle or accident?
Intention over chance?

Off the beaten track I go
My mind guided by confusion
Coherence a mere memory
Faded and with edges curled


There is a frenzy here
Blissfully ignoring
The end

StuF

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I know the Indian pacific, and the country it traverses... Grew up in one of the hamlets that would begin to shake on frosty nights as the train forwarned its coming still 10 kilometres down the line.

Your poem brought to mind an almost long forgotten stoicism and acceptance so elemental as to allow the raw durability of a hard yet sensitive landscape to reside within our own neural network. And to hum and chug into the outward ripples of spirit...

Thank you so much for sharing, @StuF

Very much a meaningful read for me.

God bless 🙏

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Thanks @Former-Member

I'm glad you connected with it

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Thanks @Kyle1

I really appreciate your response 🙂

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Its a beauty @StuF . I could hear a faint digeridoo and hear the clickity clack on the track. Thanks for posting it fella. Tonys

Now I'm gunna get the Rn to read it to me slow and I reckon it'll lull me of to a lovely sleep.

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Thanks @tonys

Hope it helps with sleep!!

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ZzzzzZ ZzzzzzZ ZzzzZ @StuF tonys

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lol @tonys !

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Love train trips @StuF also evocative of other journeys.

Thanks Apple

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@StuF i think your poem is wonderful. thank you for sharingxx

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Cheers @Appleblossom 🙂

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