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Tendrils of Ysgard

Tendrils of Ysgard

I have a blog where I put all my poems in, but I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post links here...

Here's one of the poems.

The voices talk,
The replaceds walk,
The cops stalk.

Running away,
Nerves fray,
Thoughts stray.

Praying for relief,
No god and no belief,
Respite be brief.

Fear is to not be beckoned,
Everything has darkened,
I feel burdened.

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@GonePirate and @Appleblossom, the best and the simplest way I shall explain this to you is by quoting a Wiki sentence.

"The theme of Ysgard is the glory of heroic, individual struggle. Ysgard is also a plane of inspiration and creativity."

Mental illness, whatever what it is, is everyone's individual struggle, for their inner soul that struggles.

For my own illness, - Bipolar Disorder / Schizoaffective - i struggle and need inspiration and sometimes I spark in creavity, thus creating poems.

I dunno? Maybe that's too much?!

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This is a poem I made when I was completely psychotic and out there. Stayed in a PICU (psych intenstive care unit)

I would love your opinion on it, because I can't figure out what I meant myself. I have some guesses, but...

The villagers
All down below
Scanning the horizons
Beautiful the things
They know
Golden is the silence.

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Souds like a moment of inspiration and appreciation @Snuchu. What are your ideas about what it means?

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i dunno heres an interpretation...

the villagers being down below implies your at some height possibly due to the bipolar???

the beautiful things they know implies you don't share the knowledge perhaps what it is to just be???

and golden is the silence really spoke to me

it sends me a msg that u were at peace with this???

juts my thoughts

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@eth and @GonePirate, my interpretation of this is a bit vague...

I believed I was the chosen one with all the replaceds trying to get to me, so that might explain being above the villagers, and I could have thought I was in a village the time I was at the PICU.
The beautiful part I don't even know, haha.
The golden is the silence could be a meaning from my deafness and my thought of superiority about it, I dunno.

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Maybe @Snuchu by being in the village (PICU) you will be able to silence the voices??? Just another possible interpretation. Words and symbols can have so many meanings.

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thanks for your interpretation snuch I love getting the writers own thoughts so much appreciated

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Arrived suicidal,
Delusional,
Paranoid,
Depressed,
Psychotic.

Muttering all the time,
Talking to the voices,
Jumping at hallucinations,
For two weeks,
Nurses being patient with me.

Gone on two hours passes,
Graduated to day passes,
Went on overnight passes.
Sometimes it failed,
But sometimes I win.

Left optimistic,
Positive,
Hopeful,
Happy,
Sane.

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The world could be ending,
But who cares?

There's always hope,
A small light at the end.

Don't be passive,
Jump off the train,
Before it crashes.

Let live!

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