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Something’s not right

The child within

The child within

The child within screems no not again.

You promised me you wouldnt leave me

Your words are empty. They dont mean a thing

How could you do this?

I dont understand.

I feel so alone

The pain is tearing me apart.

Who can i trust?

Noone

Words are empty and meaningless

No more. I cant take it any more

A lifetime of loss that just never ends

Have to close all the doors lock everyone out

Theres no other option. Cant take it anymore.

History continues to repeat itself.

It never stops

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Powerful words @Chris are you ok

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Cant talk

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@Chris

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Hi @Chris,

This is a powerful poem. Im glad that your have found a way to express what you are going through. Sometimes everyday language doesnt quite cut it. I dont know you so well, your situation or what kind of supports that you have in your life. Please let us know if we can help at all.

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This has helped me greatly right now. I wrote your words in blue pencil just so I could read them off paper. They are beautiful. Thankyou for helping me break things down in my head. They make me feel it's ok to be sad. I hope you are ok.

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Im happy my words have helped you.

Im ok.

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@Chris. A very powerful and moving poem. Please keep writing

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The search within never ends

Why am i like this

On who can i depend

Words spoken seem empty to me

I am the only one that i can depend

You see if i let me down

It doesnt hurt so much

I stand alone, i guess by choice

People hurt in the name of trust

No more i say can i trust

Too much pain over a lifetime of trying

Yes its now only me that i am relying.

Lonenly at times i must admit

No other option

And here i sit

Contemplating my life so far

Around in circles not getting very far.

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The child within stands alone

Cold tears fall down her cheak

The land is barren

No grass no trees

Just emptyness is all she sees.

Theres a coldness in the air

And within she feelss so very scared

Theres noone to turn to

She is so completely alone

Has her heart turned to stone.

She longs to hear the warmth of a voice

But there noone there

Is this her choice?

Noone knows

noone heres her silent cry

So alone she stands untill she dies

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