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Newest poem

Newest poem

(I'm not sure what area of the forum this is being posted in, sorry...hopefully "Social" space?)

@TAB @Meowmy @Bunniekins @Bill16 @Glisten @Oaktree @Appleblossom @Judi9877 @Sophia1 @Shaz51 @Jacques @Gibbs @MissGremlin and all. So hard to make a complete list.

Below is my latest poem. I don't know how I feel about it any more. But time to release it into the wild and move on.

Hope it connects for you; in part at least...

Beyond The Pale

With only one at our disposal
With only one to keep us safe
Surely sense must guide us down
The path toward harmony

As one with our environment
As one with our humanity
What use is profit if we destroy
That which sustains our existence?

Conditioned air inflates our lungs
Temperature is on our whim
Outside, nature is less inclined
To yield to such delusions

Insufficient satisfaction
Stimulates disparity
Forever chasing the impossible
Will we never awaken?

To tolerate our slumber
Is to justify the loss
Of the sheer abundance
Entrusted to our care

Is an epic transformation
Possible at this late stage?
Or are we rather self-condemned
To pale into insignificance?

StuF

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@StuF that's amazing. Alot of it really resonates with me. Thankyou for sharing ❤️.

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@StuF that is such a beautiful poem, especially in these uncertain times. i struggle to understand how humanity can be so smart and so uneducated all at the same time. world events of late makes me so despondent towards the future. i don't worry for me but for future generations.

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Thanks @MissGremlin

I appreciate the response 🙂

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Thanks @Jacques

Yeah...who knows what we're leaving to the future? 😞

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@StuF beautiful poem. Love it. Thanks for sharing

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Thanks @Meowmy

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@StuF

Loved your poem!

Thanks so much for sharing it.

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Thanks @Oaktree

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@StuF Nice👏🏼

You make think of William Blake - that’s a big compliment coming from me.

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@StuF hey StuF 5.41am is not a good time for me to read wonderful poetry so i will come back to it later today. i think you are very clever 🙂

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