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Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

TW: Intense themes/potentially triggering content

Hey everyone, there's a few of us around that have spoken about their poetic streak, so I decided to create a space for folks to share their poetry!!

@creative_writer @tonys @tyme @Bow @Birdofparadise8 @ENKELI @Blackbird11 @Snowie @Captain24 @Shaz51 @Glisten @Former-Member @Jacques

Please also tag anyone who might want to have a read, or share some of their own!

You're welcome to share any kind of poems or small pieces of creative writing. Feel free to share some of your darker works if you have them, so long as they still remain within the bounds of the Guidelines, and please include trigger warnings and use spoiler tags as necessary.

Sometimes, this kind of deeper, more vulnerable form of expression can bring up some pretty heavy feelings. If you ever find yourself becoming distressed or dysregulated whilst sharing or reading along, please don't hesitate to reach out to your supports. The SANE line is full of lovely peeps who can sit with you through the darkness (Call 1800 187 263, Mon-Fri 10am-8pm). For out of hours support or for crisis, contact the following:

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It's hard to be vulnerable. But seeing the deeper parts in others can give us the courage to share those deeper, sometimes very raw and emotional parts of ourselves, and see that we're not alone in this wild ride called life. I hope we can learn from each other, become closer and more connected, and find resonance in our shared human experience. I'll kick us off ~

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In response to: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jynx thank you for adding me. I love words, English at school was my strong subject and I would prefer to read than watch a movie. Words to me are like a cool waterfall on a hot day.

@tonys I love your poem, it is beautiful.

I'm okay, it's cooler in Perthville today and despite the stress of bills and no money I remain confident that today is just another day and I will be all right.

Again, thank you for thinking of me 😍

In response to: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jynx love it 💐

In response to: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jacques amazing, your words are like a balm.

In response to: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jynx beautiful words

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Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Thank you kindly @ENKELI 😊💜

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Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jynx thanks for creating this thread. I stumbled on it just now and remembered something I wrote not long ago. I won't try to explain it. Hopefully the meaning speaks for itself. I'm not well versed (heh) in poetry so pretty shy about sharing so pls be kind. 😬

Here goes:

If The World Was Mine


"Treat others how you'd like to be treated,"
The weak endlessly plead with one another,
Ruled over by uncaring brutes, bullies,
Warlords, and dictators.
In the realm of the violent and manipulative,
They'd love it if you played their game.
You.
An amateur, a fool, a captive soul.
A pawn in their schemes, a plaything, an expendable minion,
Else you'd be dead.
For silence is survival's sole companion.
Stay unseen...
Don't ask questions...
You can already see that the brutes' control,
More than you, by far.
Those who try,
Slowly eaten.
Or disappear!
Forever silent,
Lost to the void.

Yes.
Bow to the prevailing paradigm.
Shoulder the burdens inherited by you.
Toil to pay for the unseen.
But don't do too much!
If you want to keep what you've earned.
And don't do too little!
Or your support may be burned.
They risk nothing while you stay meek and compliant.
Concealed -courageously- in the shadows.
Watching the whirlwind of deceit, violence, and foolery unfold in the world.
Doing as you're expected to "keep the peace".
Echoing timeless platitudes spoken by generations past.
A cog in the machine.
Keep your head down.
Do as you're told.
Do just enough,
To pay them their gold.
But keep your chin up!
And be kind to each other!
You're done-for alone,
Walk the line motherfu*cker.
But, what if?
...
..
.
..
...
Stop!
You're no Spartan,
There's no "spirit" inside you!
You've a marketing degree,
And, play tennis for excitement.
And, one of your kids hates you.
You're bankrupt!
A Coward!
With bills to pay.
That fire inside you,
Smouldering low now.
And let's be honest...
You'll never fight back.
You wouldn't know how.
Not against all that.
Who could?
No one, at least not yet.
But perhaps,
One day.
If you're brave enough,
You'll see.
You'll pick a fight.
One you can win.
(Or one you can lose bad enough,
Just to feel alive again...)
And you'll stand for something!
Not meek anymore.
Not hiding.
Not weak,
Slow,
Ashamed.
But also,
Not today.
I've got to be kind.
Because that's how I'd want to be treated.
If the world was mine.


In response to: Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jynx I’ve never tried writing poetry before. To my surprise, resting with the cats the words started to flow. This relates to my current struggles

Darkness

Here in the darkness I sit all alone

Time passes on but everyone’s gone

the nightmares and flashbacks they haunt day and night

leaving me in constant state of fright

the sun shines outside, the flowers grow

the heart and mind remember those who are gone

if the world was mine there would be no sorrow

peace and love would rein forever and ever

for today, the world was bright and gay

here in the darkness I will continue to stay

In response to: Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Former-Member wow, if that was just off the top of your head, it's amazing.

Did the cats help or hinder? 😊 (I have 2 cats myself and there is nothing quite like resting with them next to you)

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Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

@Jacques Can I ask you a favour please. If you write like that. . Please Tag ol Tonys

Mate I nearly missed your beautiful poem.. Hey. friend.. tonys..

In response to: Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)

Thats beautiful @Former-Member . Felt I was there. tonys.

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