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So Who Cares

IsAnybodyThereSenior Contributor13 May 2022, 4:05 pm AEST

So Who Cares

I hope this one passes muster. The sentence in brackets I wrote at the time of original writing; 2016. I'm sure I've written worse.

(Probably the worst thing I have written! I just can't get it right! But hey! Who cares?)

Caring

Sharing

Being One.

Crisis Over?

Back To Fun.

Leaving The Desperate

The Lonely One.

Where Are The People

Who don't belong

I can't hear them

I never have

And I feel really, really bad.

No one there, only me

Just my shadow do I see

I hug the darkness to me

I feel its close familiarity

It is my only friend

And tempts the depression

The solidarity of one is all

But I am all, just one

Fake laugh, fake smile, real tears

And faking always fun!

Being there for everyone

I know where I'm not wanted

I am but a meagre shadow soul

And everlastingly I'm hunted

I know how I will end up

My fate is written for me

I am not real soul you see,

Just a point of singularity.

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In response to: So Who Cares

SnowieSenior Contributor13 May 2022, 4:14 pm AEST

Re: So Who Cares

I think it is well written @IsAnybodyThere

Can relate to a lot of what you wrote.

Hoping your day has gone well

Snowie xoxo

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IsAnybodyThereSenior Contributor13 May 2022, 9:19 pm AEST

Re: So Who Cares

Thanks @Snowie . I really appreciate your comments and support.
I often just sit and play with words. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. IsAnybodyThere. Xx

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HistoryloverSenior Contributor14 May 2022, 7:15 am AEST

Re: So Who Cares

Well written, and I share your sentiment @IsAnybodyThere. I hope life soon takes on a more rosy hue for you and everybody else in need here. Cheers.

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